This is my feedback to Marcyeo’s post. https://marc335.opened.ca/my-first-encounters-with-school/
Your post offers an engaging and deeply personal reflection on your unique educational journey, and I appreciate how you’ve framed your experiences within both formal and informal learning contexts. Here’s some constructive feedback to consider:
- Personal Voice: Your writing feels authentic and relatable, with a clear sense of your personality shining through. Sharing specific details like your early foray into computer programming and filmmaking adds vividness and credibility.
- Critical Perspective: You’ve articulated a thoughtful critique of formal education, grounded in your personal experiences. This perspective invites readers to reflect on their own educational journeys and systems they’ve encountered.
- Philosophical Insights: The emphasis on self-directed learning and curiosity resonates as a powerful message. Your acknowledgment of the challenges of learning (like forgetting and re-learning) is insightful and relatable.
- Structure and Flow: The post is well-structured, transitioning smoothly from your early homeschooling experience to your later struggles with formal education. This chronological approach makes it easy to follow your journey.